Unfinished !!

Unfinished.... by Priya

Unfinished chore beckons you,
Unfinished task captivates you,
Unfinished desire motivates you,
Unfinished Love, enchants you.

© Deepa
Jun 8, 2008
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9 comments:

ROSA E OLIVIER said...

Nell mezzo del cammin di nostra vita...
!?...passavo per un saluto!

Deepa said...

Hi Rosa..
Eventhough i dont undestand waht i you have siad.. i think it must be seomthing nice :-D

Welcome
Nice to meet you,
Regards

? said...

http://arsenicandlace.blogspot.com/

Deepa said...

hi Mr/ Ms ?
Thanks for dropping by...

kaunquest said...

that was pretty good! liked it!

Crimson Shimmer said...

hi there...
like the blog :)
kewl idea

and priya has a lovely way with words...

Meghna said...

Lovely :P

Lisa said...

Hope you'll be back to writing soon, Deepa. Your poetry is so affecting,

Lisa

Miss Peony said...

I love poems that make you think, like this one. Well done!

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