Appreciating Poetry: Correct Me.... So I can Reciprocate

Correct Me.... So I can Reciprocate

Correct Me.... So I can Reciprocate     by RajaKrishnan

Your desire to reciprocate
Reveals values and principles
That parent’s alone inculcate
         Care not, for idle rebuke
         Fret not, on failed attempt
         Ponder on the point you missed
Mistakes teach values too
Evading them is, not to try
Victory eludes, when we fail to try

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4 comments:

Commissioner said...: I like this so much, I'm speechless, which is hard to do, because I usually have a lot to say.... but I am speechless. 5 stars!!; December 14, 2007 at 10:00 PM
Deepa said...: Thank you fredrick, You made my day.. thank you so much; December 15, 2007 at 12:55 PM
Alok said...: this one was too good Deepa ... I hardly follow the backlinks ... but I did this time and mam if I can say this u were brilliant ... absolutely ..

I immensely enjoyed flutter,merge and dreams as well ....

Alok; December 15, 2007 at 10:34 PM
Deepa said...: Thank you alok for all the appreciation..boy!! i fell i am on cloud nine..thanks to you; December 16, 2007 at 7:00 AM