Cut the Ropes

Cut the Ropes ... by Vishesh

Cut the ropes, they tie you down,
Bet the odds, they bare your core.
Cut the ropes, let yourself loose
Aim for the stars, for the sky is within your reach.

© Deepa
Jan 9, 2009
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22 comments:

vishesh said...

aim for the universe,for the stars are within your reach :)

Deepa said...

wow, thats the spirit

Deynii Devitch said...

it's almost like shakespeare wore a cheerleading uniform.
Ok, that's not the best metaphor but it's the only way I could express it.
It encourages people (like cheerleaders) but it's in a very beautiful poetic way (like Shakespeare).

Deepa said...

Hi Deynii

Welcome here,
glad you enjoyed this.
:)

NITHIN said...

nice

Kaibee said...

Nice blog Deepa!

I really love this poem of yours 'cos I can relate to it easily!! :)

Deepa said...

@Nithin, @kaibee
Thanks for taking a moment to appreciate my efforts.
Best Regards

Anonymous said...

The matchless message, is very interesting to me :)

இனியன் பாலாஜி said...

அருமை மிகவும் அருமை

ஹலோ ப்ளீஸ் கொஞ்சம் தமிழிலேயும் முயற்சி செய்யலாமே?
எனக்கு தமிழ் வராதுன்னு வழக்கம் போல பாட்டு பாடக்கூடாது. நல்லாதான்
எழுதறீங்க. எங்களுக்கு உங்க தமிழ் பிடிச்சிருக்கு.
முயற்சி செய்யறீங்க இப்பவே பாராட்டிடறேன்

இனியன் பாலாஜி

Deepa said...

வாங்க பாலாஜி
பாராட்டுக்கு நன்றி.
ரொம்ப நம்பிக்கை வச்சிருக்கீங்க. இதுக்காகவே கண்டிப்பா முயர்ச்சி பண்ணறேன்.
(ஆனாலும் ரொம்பத்தான் நம்புறீங்க..
.. நீங்க ரொம்ப நல்லவருங்க..)

Sam said...

Thats a very strong message delivered in so few words - thats what really makes it memorable. I love it, and its going to stick in my mind.

Deepa said...

Welcome here Sam,
Thanks for the appreciation
Glad u liked it.
Regards

Lisa said...

So very beautiful and uplifting. We are the ones who put limits on ourselves. We can free ourselves, also!

Deepa said...

hey! lisa,
Good to see you again.
Glad u enjoyed reading this

joehebden said...

An inspiring short poem.

Deepa said...

@joehebden
Thank you, Glad you liked this

Madison said...

Goodness, you are darling. Your poems are so delightful, your visuals immaculate. I adore you. Please visit mine sometime, I would really appreciate your feedback, and your rope cutting.

Afternoon Tea
http://www.madisonreece.blogspot.com

Deepa said...

Hi Maddison,
Thanks for dropping by.
You made my day today

Madison said...

Deepa,
I love your blog more and more every time I visit. THANK YOU for the beautiful poem you posted on my blog. You are so lovely. Please, please, please stop by for tea again, you darling creature.

K said...

I particularly like when poems are short and sweet. It seems the less amount of words you can use to say something the more that something means. You accomplished that here, it is a beautiful poem.

Deepa said...

@K

Thanks for dropping by.
Glad that you liked my poem.
I dont have the patience to read through a lengthy composition.

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