Thirst

Thirst... by Priya

Moon’s thirst for the tides.....
…reveals his thirst to be by her side,
Star’s thirst to follow the moon....
… reveals his thirst to pursue her fondness,
Angel’s thirst to ride the stars.....
… reveals thirst to seek her presence,
Sea’s thirst to reach the shore...
…. reveals his thirst to grasp ...
…...every passing moment spent with her.

© Deepa
Nov 22, 2007
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4 comments:

Shiva said...

Evrything obeys the law of gravity and results in thirst, but not your poems, for it always makes the readers float

Deepa G said...

Thanks for such a poetic appreciation...that's lovely

pria said...

Deepa,

Here is a quote for ya:

Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~Kahlil Gibran


As I told you, poetry comes with more involvement from your heart and mind....

Deepa said...

thanks priya.. that was touching

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