Seasons (re)Turn...

Seasons (re)Turn...by Jeevan

Dazzling rays
…cuts across drizzling drops
Vibrant colors
….emerges along drizzling path
Seasons turn
….to straighten our twisted thoughts
Seasons return
….to remind us on forgotten thoughts

 © Deepa
Oct 31, 2007 		RATE POEM

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3 comments:

Jeevan said...

Thanks for this thoughtful comment deepa :) very nice!

October 29, 2007 at 1:17 PM
Deepa said...

Glad you liked it. Hope you dont mind if i continue to write reply-poems as comments to your poems.. would that be ok with you ? ??

October 29, 2007 at 3:25 PM
Jeevan said...

I am pleased to have your poem as my comment. its very nice to get another poem in addition for mine :)

November 1, 2007 at 3:00 PM

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