Sky

Sky by Vishesh

The bright-lights bridges time's boundaries.....
Urging us to bridge differences across timeless boundaries.
Winged friends return to perch on the roofs.....
Urging us never to forget out roots.
Drifting clouds compose poetry in space.....
Urging our minds to transcend across time and space.

© Deepa
Apr 17, 2007
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4 comments:

Srijith Unni said...

Poetry Appreciation is a tough ting to do and yet a very interesting thing. Because there are so many different perspectives and so many different kinds of images that emerge in different beautiful minds.

Deepa, I humbly request you to have a look at some of the poems I have written. http://srijithunni.blogspot.com/search/label/Poems
It will be a privilege for me. Looking forward to learn a lot about poetry appreciation from your blog. :)

Have Fun, Take Care and God Bless!

With Best Regards,
Srijith.

Deepa said...

Welcome Unni
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Poetry Appreciation is a tough ting ........... different beautiful minds.
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Yes indeed.. very rightly put
The diffrent images arise when poeple see the same poem is largely dependent on ones emotinal state at the particular point of time..

Same thing hold true .. when the same person sees the same poem ... at his different emotional stages

Thanks for your appreciation and encouragement over this blog..I started this as a passe... just to humour my friends..who write good peoms..

All i try here.. instead of appreciating a poem as " its very nice.. i enjoyed the concept..." kind - of-words...i try to put my thoughts into verse

Hope to see more of you
Good luck on poetry
Deepa

iamvisheshur said...

the light shines the brightest!!

Deepa said...

True vishesh

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