Devil The God by Vishesh |
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Deepa Apr 12, 2007 |
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Devil The God
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Using poetry as a medium of expression is a commendable talent. Here I merely express my appreciation for such a talent. Every poem presented here is a token of appreciation to the original poem penned.
Devil The God by Vishesh |
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Deepa Apr 12, 2007 |
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deepa
reading that tells me you have understood what i meant....
Yes Vishesh... You poem was not difficult to understand.. but If i may say... (please dont take offence)..You need to stucture your lines more appropriately
It all appears as one long continious string of words...which might give the first impression of soooo looong..
break the lines with commas, organise them as stanzas.. if the poem is long
Hope you dont mind me telling this
no i don't mind, i am working on that..usually i write on paper ten on the comp..but for the past few months i am doing it directly so the thing is there..
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